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A father kidnaps his daughter in order to spend one last day with her . . .
this story is still in the rough draft phases
this story is still in the rough draft phases
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great stuff
first part all the way to terry's house... pure son of a bitch....
using his daughter to get back at his ex
geting her in a "grand" environment as before
egotistic asshole, let's give her pizza and spoile her every day to the rest of her life.... let's make a row model out of her....
men I have a 4 years old daughter and I fight with my wife because I want her to put her hand on the electrical plug to feel the pain if she has to (maybe extreme but I think you get the picture) but I would never endanger my daught with my mistakes.... stupid thing to do.
Don is an ass... its everybodys fault but his....
So he gave her a great presentation on how to be a dad.... great stuff
about your work.... made me feel, think, complaint.... I guess thats gret...
It has some errors (writing) so you should read again and correct it
great stuff you have a talent, keep on using it
first part all the way to terry's house... pure son of a bitch....
using his daughter to get back at his ex
geting her in a "grand" environment as before
egotistic asshole, let's give her pizza and spoile her every day to the rest of her life.... let's make a row model out of her....
men I have a 4 years old daughter and I fight with my wife because I want her to put her hand on the electrical plug to feel the pain if she has to (maybe extreme but I think you get the picture) but I would never endanger my daught with my mistakes.... stupid thing to do.
Don is an ass... its everybodys fault but his....
So he gave her a great presentation on how to be a dad.... great stuff
about your work.... made me feel, think, complaint.... I guess thats gret...
It has some errors (writing) so you should read again and correct it
great stuff you have a talent, keep on using it